Revising Business Letters

This is a business letter we had to revise and edit with a partner in class. I found it enjoyable to go through the letter, highlight errors or parts that could be improved, and make the necessary changes. The pre-written letter was sub-par, but I think my revised version is something that would be appropriate to send. Doing this classwork has re-instilled the importance of proofreading into me. Getting someone else to proofread your work, or even doing an extra revision yourself can really improve the piece.

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